The evening


I
and you
in dreamy world
I waiting for sunset
for you promised to meet
me that dusk under scanty rays,
Lonely beach ,birds made way into sky
nature laughed as u nvr met tht evening
just kept waiting , for you cared not to visit
Tears on my way ....i walked along my life's play







P.S: Just gave try to poetry...a pattern poetry...no idea what this pattern is called...math + poetry is awesome...your valuable comments are most welcome...it can also be called 55 poetry too :D

19 comments:

Rane (The Orchid with All Shades Pink) said...

wonderful..lovely.. fantabulous...:)

♥ ♥ ℓỌvεšιcк ° ♥ ♥ said...

Istly,
thanks for visiting.
and yeah the try is amzing...u write well.

bondgal_rulz said...

Even I dunno what it'll be called...but bada mast hai jo bhi hai. :)

Keep writing.

Cheers

Samir Ranjan Panda said...

cool buddy .. keep evolving patterns and keep poeming more !!!

Dhanya said...

A really different pattern for sure :)

The Solitary Writer said...

haha u created a new poetry form....amazing brother.. keep inventing new styles :)

tc
cheers,

solitary writer :}

Mads said...

It's nice..short n sweet... :)

Amal Bose said...

nice work.. :)
keep writing

Priya Joyce said...

heyyy that ws sad..

nice one bt..:):)

The Geekie said...

@Rane

Thanks thanks thanks :P

The Geekie said...

@lovesick

ur blog is so cool...
& Thank u :)

The Geekie said...

@bondgal
Thanks a lot
Cheers :)

The Geekie said...

@Samir
lol.........Thank u

The Geekie said...

@Dhanya
Thanksssssssss

The Geekie said...

@Solitary Writer

Thanks brother
btw i liked ur profile name :)

The Geekie said...

@Mads

Thankx for the visit

The Geekie said...

@Amal
:)

will visit ur blog soon :)

The Geekie said...

@PJ
sad ya happy...acha laga na :P...Thanks for the read :)

workhard said...

I love sunsets..

and the pic in this post too..

The poem came out pretty nice... a lil sad



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