I
and you
in dreamy world
I waiting for sunset
for you promised to meet
me that dusk under scanty rays,
Lonely beach ,birds made way into sky
nature laughed as u nvr met tht evening
just kept waiting , for you cared not to visit
Tears on my way ....i walked along my life's play
P.S: Just gave try to poetry...a pattern poetry...no idea what this pattern is called...math + poetry is awesome...your valuable comments are most welcome...it can also be called 55 poetry too :D
and you
in dreamy world
I waiting for sunset
for you promised to meet
me that dusk under scanty rays,
Lonely beach ,birds made way into sky
nature laughed as u nvr met tht evening
just kept waiting , for you cared not to visit
Tears on my way ....i walked along my life's play
P.S: Just gave try to poetry...a pattern poetry...no idea what this pattern is called...math + poetry is awesome...your valuable comments are most welcome...it can also be called 55 poetry too :D
19 comments:
wonderful..lovely.. fantabulous...:)
Istly,
thanks for visiting.
and yeah the try is amzing...u write well.
Even I dunno what it'll be called...but bada mast hai jo bhi hai. :)
Keep writing.
Cheers
cool buddy .. keep evolving patterns and keep poeming more !!!
A really different pattern for sure :)
haha u created a new poetry form....amazing brother.. keep inventing new styles :)
tc
cheers,
solitary writer :}
It's nice..short n sweet... :)
nice work.. :)
keep writing
heyyy that ws sad..
nice one bt..:):)
@Rane
Thanks thanks thanks :P
@lovesick
ur blog is so cool...
& Thank u :)
@bondgal
Thanks a lot
Cheers :)
@Samir
lol.........Thank u
@Dhanya
Thanksssssssss
@Solitary Writer
Thanks brother
btw i liked ur profile name :)
@Mads
Thankx for the visit
@Amal
:)
will visit ur blog soon :)
@PJ
sad ya happy...acha laga na :P...Thanks for the read :)
I love sunsets..
and the pic in this post too..
The poem came out pretty nice... a lil sad
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