
I
and you
in dreamy world
I waiting for sunset
for you promised to meet
me that dusk under scanty rays,
Lonely beach ,birds made way into sky
nature laughed as u nvr met tht evening
just kept waiting , for you cared not to visit
Tears on my way ....i walked along my life's play
P.S: Just gave try to poetry...a pattern poetry...no idea what this pattern is called...math + poetry is awesome...your valuable comments are most welcome...it can also be called 55 poetry too :D
and you
in dreamy world
I waiting for sunset
for you promised to meet
me that dusk under scanty rays,
Lonely beach ,birds made way into sky
nature laughed as u nvr met tht evening
just kept waiting , for you cared not to visit
Tears on my way ....i walked along my life's play
P.S: Just gave try to poetry...a pattern poetry...no idea what this pattern is called...math + poetry is awesome...your valuable comments are most welcome...it can also be called 55 poetry too :D


